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유경민 2012/06/27 19:46:12  |  완료
Topic:Imageine you have to decision. Who would you talk to before making your decision? Write a four-paragraph essay. choosing one person and two reasons explaining why. Use details to support your answer.
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  If I have to make an important decision, I want to talk with my friends. There're reason why I want to talk with my friends when I have to make an important decision.
  First, my friends are very smart. For example they are study well then me and they also the first or second,third class, so many people in my class think they are jenious. Also teacher acknowledge them too.
  Second, they are friendly and kind to me. For example when I didn't brought the things that I need to use in classtime I sometimes borrow them and when I don't no the questions that is very hard, they help me to solve the question. Also sometimes they make me laugh.
  That's why I want to talk with my friends when I have to make a important decision.
유경민
12-06-27 19:46
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조영신
12-06-28 08:45
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There are reasons why~
For example  they study better than I so they get the first, the second and the third in the class. ~ Also teacher acknowledges them, too.
when I didn't bring things that I needed to use in class, I borrowed theirs. Having the hard questions that I can't answer they help me. Sometimes they make me laugh also.
~
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12-07-05 22:09
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